Week 12
Quick fixes according to feedback: Dr. Kennedy was mostly pleased with the overall results I showed him last week. However, he did point out a couple places that could be refined: Eyes position: Around frame 120, the eyes would look better if they were moved slightly more toward the center. This would make it clearer that Miri is "looking straight forward" as she should be focused directly on Fred in this moment. Also, pushing the eyelids higher would help convey the surprised/shocked expression in the scene. When I was adjusting the eye placement, I focused too much on balancing the amount of eye white on each side, which led to the eyes being slightly off-center compared to the reference footage. Before After Same around frame 136, the eye placement was too far up, but instead, it should be more towards the center. Before After Floaty feet: Between frames 22-26, where the center of gravity shifts from the left leg to the right, the feet seem to float a bit, especially duri...